Monday, December 16, 2013

Pg. 96

1.Same-sex classrooms should not be a problem for students in grades 10 through 12 because it allows them to socialize better and also be opened with all types of gender.
It is a closed thesis because it states the main point and also it has the word because. It is effective because it goes straight to the point of what i am trying to say.

2. Although E.M Froster's position in choosing between betraying his country against betraying his friends might be a fair choice, without his country he would have not been who he is today in the sense of his culture.
It is a counter argument because of the word although. It also shows how I'm disagreeing with the author, how i am challenging him.

3. Gun control who is a major issue in the u.s and who has the tendency to increase the death rate of innocent people is just one of the controversial problem that could be fix without affecting anyone.
A Open thesis because it does not states all the points of how it could be fixed. I can talk and talk until i have made my point. I do not limit my argument.

4. I agree with the fact that advertising limits people's will to choose because it has many hidden messages and persuasive methods that makes you think that what the advertisement has, no one else has it and that it is the best of all.
It is a closed thesis because of the word the word because followed by the main points that will be elaborated on. It focuses on the most important point of the essay's prompt.

5.  Teachers should be completely strict with its students when it comes to plagiarism because they will allow the future generation to be trustworthy people and have a open mind in every subject, be able to think outside the box.
It is a closed thesis and it is effective because this is not a very big subject and you can go straight to the point and write a short essay out of it.

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